Andrew I think your pitch was well put together. I also think you got your points across in a very clear and understandable manner. However, I think that you should've used this opportunity to improve your pitch or even the delivery. I think that there is always room for improvement so I think you could've made some changes. I also think your reflection could've been more detailed. Great entry can't wait to read more.
Andrew
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was well put together. I also think you got your points across in a very clear and understandable manner. However, I think that you should've used this opportunity to improve your pitch or even the delivery. I think that there is always room for improvement so I think you could've made some changes. I also think your reflection could've been more detailed. Great entry can't wait to read more.